What I liked most about my speech was my introduction because I started out my speech with confidence and an interesting question for the audience. I also followed my outline and tried to stick to it which made my purpose clear and showed the importance of the topic to the audience. My eye contact was on most of the audience but I wished I looked towards the sides more, my posture was good , my legs did not cross, and my hand movement was minimal and did not move too much which is the case when I usually talk to people. I think I also was able to show the importance of my topic to audience by getting their attention. I avoided making my speech to technical so it will be easy for those who ...
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...de for yourself what is right and what is wrong, and then please, expect as much of the world around you. Try to make the world good according to your standards.” Colbert seemed confident throughout his speech and gave encouragement to the audience in a very relaxed way. He gave strong eye contact throughout his speech and overall delivered a strong commencement speech.
In conclusion, I have learned a lot from studying the different ways to deliver a speech and how to capture an audience 's attention. I was personally encouraged by both speakers and found their delivery to be relaxed but powerful, and interesting throughout their entire speech. Both used humor to capture the audience 's attention which I find to be smart to get both the audience and speaker to become relaxed. I have taken away many tips by watching these speeches and now look forward to making more.
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